Zindagi ne ab ek naya mod liya
sachche ko sachcha naa rahne diya
cheen kar bachpan bada bana diya
isne bachche ko bachcha naa rahne diya
apni khushiyo ki khatir
hme bhi shatranj ka mohara bana diya
naa rahne diya haathi ki
seedhi chal hm chal sake
bana kar vajeer hamko bhi
tedi chal chalna sikha diya...
Wednesday, February 3, 2010
zindagi..
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badal rahi hai na zindgi Sahitiyika ....Aisa hi hota hai....Is race mein mohra hi ban jaate hai ham aur jaakar bhi kuch na kar paate hai ham
bahut sunder rachna hai aapki madam jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai ... aap lucknow ki zameen se hai yeh jaankar khushi hui ... hum lucknowi kisi bhi chetra me peeche nahi hai ....aapke blogs lucknow waale ke liye ek bahut achcha gift hai .... bahut sunder rachna ...badhyiyan aapko
महाशिवरात्रि की हार्दिक शुभकामनायें!
बहुत बढ़िया लगा ! बहुत ही सुन्दर और भावपूर्ण रचना लिखा है आपने! बधाई!
बहुत सुन्दर रचना
आभार.................
बहुत सुन्दर रचना
आभार.................
U r making a point with the poem ...
beautiful..
cheen kar bachpan bada bana diya
isne bachche ko bachcha naa rahne diya....
laajawaab... bahut dino baad post najar aayi aapki.. kahan thi is beech....
नव संवत्सर मंगलमय हो.
हर दिन सूरज नया उदय हो.
सदा आप पर ईश सदय हों-
जग-जीवन में 'सलिल' विजय हो.
बहुत बढ़िया
@alim aazmi
thank you
I am not from Lucknow. but my would be is from Kanpur. :)
@babli
thanks for ur appreciation
@psing
thank you
@devil
you understood the point. that was the main aim.. :)
@abhishek
i m busy with my work.
likhne ka ab waqt nahi milta. :(
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