I believe in the imagination. What I cannot see is infinitely more important than what I can see.

Wednesday, February 3, 2010

zindagi..


Zindagi ne ab ek naya mod liya
sachche ko sachcha naa rahne diya
cheen kar bachpan bada bana diya
isne bachche ko bachcha naa rahne diya

apni khushiyo ki khatir
hme bhi shatranj ka mohara bana diya
naa rahne diya haathi ki
seedhi chal hm chal sake
bana kar vajeer hamko bhi
tedi chal chalna sikha diya...

14 comments:

Priya said...

badal rahi hai na zindgi Sahitiyika ....Aisa hi hota hai....Is race mein mohra hi ban jaate hai ham aur jaakar bhi kuch na kar paate hai ham

अलीम आज़मी said...

bahut sunder rachna hai aapki madam jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai ... aap lucknow ki zameen se hai yeh jaankar khushi hui ... hum lucknowi kisi bhi chetra me peeche nahi hai ....aapke blogs lucknow waale ke liye ek bahut achcha gift hai .... bahut sunder rachna ...badhyiyan aapko

Babli said...

महाशिवरात्रि की हार्दिक शुभकामनायें!
बहुत बढ़िया लगा ! बहुत ही सुन्दर और भावपूर्ण रचना लिखा है आपने! बधाई!

psingh said...

बहुत सुन्दर रचना
आभार.................

psingh said...

बहुत सुन्दर रचना
आभार.................

Devil Incarnate... said...

U r making a point with the poem ...
beautiful..

अभिषेक प्रसाद 'अवि' said...

cheen kar bachpan bada bana diya
isne bachche ko bachcha naa rahne diya....

laajawaab... bahut dino baad post najar aayi aapki.. kahan thi is beech....

दिव्य नर्मदा divya narmada said...

नव संवत्सर मंगलमय हो.
हर दिन सूरज नया उदय हो.
सदा आप पर ईश सदय हों-
जग-जीवन में 'सलिल' विजय हो.

Yatish said...

बहुत बढ़िया

SAHITYIKA said...

@alim aazmi
thank you
I am not from Lucknow. but my would be is from Kanpur. :)

SAHITYIKA said...

@babli
thanks for ur appreciation

SAHITYIKA said...

@psing
thank you

SAHITYIKA said...

@devil
you understood the point. that was the main aim.. :)

SAHITYIKA said...

@abhishek
i m busy with my work.
likhne ka ab waqt nahi milta. :(

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